Academic writing is a highly
specialized genre of written communication. As a discipline, it
involves at least the following three integral aspects:
- good linguistic knowledge
and good communicative competence;
- an awareness of the requirements
of an academic 'discourse community' (typically a university department
or professional body);
- a specialized knowledge
of lexis and jargon involved in a subject area.
The 'discourse community' to
which academic writing belongs is governed by particular rules and conventions
(Swales, 1990) that are in themselves specialized,
and may indeed seem impenetrable to outsiders. Once these elements are
known, the student must continue to write in a manner that is appropriate
to that community, in order to maintain 'acceptance' within the group.
In FL settings, academic writing
may involve some of the following tasks:
- a subject-specific assignment
written in the TL (target language);
- a summary of an article;
- a written project based
on research;
- a laboratory report;
- a conference paper.
Academic writing has become
something of a 'buzz word' within departments in HE nowadays, and there
seems to be a huge demand for it. However, it is important to recognize
that academic writing instruction (whether in L1 or a FL) is a relatively
small, specialized branch of university teaching as a whole, and particularly
of FL departments. Set within an average lifetime, the period in which
students are engaged in academic writing is relatively short, and it seems
important to situate academic writing realistically within the context
of the students' writing needs as a whole. Consider for a moment the status
of academic writing in your own department:
Reflection activity 7
In my department....
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1. good academic
writing is the main goal of my students. |
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2. good academic
writing is a strong expectation within my department. |
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3. academic
writing is neither desired nor required by my students. |
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4. students
are given specific instruction in how to produce academic writing.
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5. students
are expected to 'know' what academic writing is and to produce it
without help. |
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6. students
seem to progress 'naturally' to academic writing over a period of
time. |
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7. academic
writing is seen as unnecessarily 'elitist'. |
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8. academic
writing is never discussed or debated. |
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In doing this task you will
have noticed that either:
- academic writing is discussed
at great length;
OR
- it is not discussed at all;
OR
- it comes up as a topic from
time to time.
If academic writing is not
very important for you, you may wish to skip the rest of this section
and the next one, and move to 9.3 practical suggestions
for developing FL writing skills.
When teaching academic writing,
one generally seeks a balance between an awareness of the rhetorical functions
of the language (stating a point of view, describing, exemplifying, summarizing)
and fluency activities based on use of source materials. The ability to
self-evaluate is also important. You will find below five sample tasks
that form part of academic writing programmes for postgraduate students
in various disciplines. You can adapt the exercise types to suit various
contexts and languages. Together, they demonstrate the range of activity
types that can be set, with tasks ranging from the reflective to the more
model-based.
Sample task 1
Improving the flow
Level: advanced
Students are asked to
look at the following academic text that is reasonably accurate,
but in which there are problems with the flow and the reference
system. They have to make changes to the passage to improve the
flow.
Beckett's play Waiting
for Godot was first performed in Theatre Babylone on 5 January
1953. It attracted considerable attention. In time it was considered
to be one of the most important plays in British theatre. Two tramps,
Estragon and Vladimir, are waiting for a man called Godot in a barren
landscape. Everything such as the identity of Godot, the reason
they are waiting for his coming and its setting remains unclear.
They expect that all incomprehensible riddles will be settled, but
this does not lead to satisfaction. He never comes and his absence
does not bring any solutions. Nobody felt catharsis after the first
performance. It is certain that some of them felt something significant
in Godot. Martin Esslin categorized this sort of new style drama
as the Theatre of the Absurd. It is a new style drama.
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Sample task 2
Reflecting on writing
Level: intermediate and above
This is a self-study
exercise. Students are asked to go through a text they have written
and to edit it, asking themselves the following questions:
- Does every sentence
serve a clear purpose? [If you have any sentences that seem to
be without purpose, leave them out.]
- Are there any unnecessary
repetitions? [Each idea should only be expressed once in a paragraph.]
- Is each paragraph
linked clearly to the next? [ If not, you need to try to write
a good topic sentence.]
- Does the text have
any word wastage? [A good idea is to reduce each paragraph by
50%, to see what can be left out.]
- Is it clear what
words like 'it', 'this', 'them' refer to? [If in doubt, repeat
the reference.]
- What is the link
between each sentence in the text? [If there is no link apparent,
put one in.]
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Sample task 3
Avoiding jargon
Level: advanced
In essays, it is often
best if students avoid unnecessarily jargonistic expressions, to
ensure clarity of thought. It is important, particularly, to avoid
'lifting' expressions directly from research papers or out of text
books with little thought about the implications of the terms and
expressions that they are quoting.
Students are asked to
consider a number of phrases and sentences. They should identify
the jargon, and try to improve the clarity of the style, as if they
were incorporating the ideas into their own assignment, eg:
The
ideal reader, or 'super-reader' posited by structuralism was in
effect a transcendental subject, absolved from all limiting social
determinants (Eagleton, 1983: 121).
Rewritten version/paraphrase:
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Sample activity 4
Discourse markers and other text features
Level: advanced (Engineering)
Below is a short extract
from Melan (1993).
Complete the text with
the missing words (you should use each word only once):
from each
viewpoint
having
interrelated
essentially fundamentally
whether
that
it main
Process Elements
……. an operational ………., a process is a bounded set of ……. work
activities ……. ……… prescribed inputs and outputs. ….. has a well-defined
beginning and end.
A process is ……… 'a method
for doing things'. The ….. purpose of a productive process is to
create from a set of inputs one or more outputs of greater value
than the inputs.
There are three key elements
common to any productive process: transformation, feedback control
and repeatability. Output is ……….. the result of a transformation
or set of transformations. In the model shown in Figure 2-1, inputs,
….. they are material, equipment, other tangible objects, or various
kinds of information, are converted by a series of activities into
an output …….. is provided to a recipient. These transformations
can be classified as physical, locational, transactional and informational.
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Sample activity 5
Shaping an assignment
Level: advanced:
Students are asked to
think of an assignment that they are working on at the moment, or
for which they have a title.
Below are some typical
assignment structures. Which would be most suitable for your own
assignment?
- Starting with two
extreme views, describe them, and then suggest a third option.
- Starting with something
that no-one has ever done before, develop it.
- 'De-marginalization'
- treat something which has been ignored, or which has often been
criticized as being 'old-fashioned' or untrendy.
- Give general background
to a piece of literature, and then discuss the themes.
- Choose a feature
of style that seems to be 'hidden', and make it central to the
passage (eg in a commentary).
- Outline the main
approaches to a topic, and then suggest which one is best.
- Give an outline of
a theory, and then show how the theory can work in practice, when
applied to a book, film, etc.
- Go from problem to
solution.
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